User talk:Fdeltaconard/sandbox

You can identify my edits to your draft by looking at "View history" for the page. I will be adding additional comments here. Hoopes (talk) 15:47, 14 May 2019 (UTC)

It looks as if this would be a good beginning for a general article on ceramic analysis (which does not yet exist) in Wikipedia. I'm surprised that this does not yet exist and think it would be a valuable additions. For that reason, I think what you've done here would be a worthwhile addition. Please note that one of the most valuable features in Wikipedia is the ability hyperlink other articles. The best way to undertake this while writing a draft entry is to open a separate window in which you can search on key terms to determine whether or not there are existing articles, what specific terminology is used, and to incorporate relevant links into your own draft--often by making slight modifications in language. In general, only the first mention of a topic needs to be hyperlinked. However, a thematic article such as this one can be extremely valuable for directing users to other existing articles. Please note that I have added quite a few hyperlinks, including ones where I have used the "|" character to adjust for slight wording changes. Another aspect to consider should be the use of subheadings. I will see if I can add some that make sense. Otherwise, this is a nice job of making a useful contribution. It would benefit further from the inclusion of more in-text citations and bibliographic references. Please be sure to include full bibliographic citations for the references used. Hoopes (talk) 16:36, 14 May 2019 (UTC)