User talk:Felicia Oduh/sandbox

Everything looks good. As you keep writing your article, some of the information in your lead may shift into the article itself. Thea365Instructor (talk) 23:22, 4 May 2018 (UTC)

Noah's Peer Review
In the lead section, I would suggest adding that he is a theatre professor and Artistic Director at the Goodman in the first sentence. Also maybe wait until later in the article to mention that he works at Northwestern

In the background, some of the sentences feel a little short and could be put combined, for example "It was during a high school theatre class that Godinez became interested in theatre. He was convinced by his younger sister to take the class with her" could become something like "Godinez's interest in theatre started in high school after being convinced by his sister to take a class with her."

Everything else looks great! If you want, you could create a theatre credits table to sort out all of his projects, you can look at most actor's/director's pages to see what that looks like (if you don't already know) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nokuds (talk • contribs) 18:16, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

Farrah's Peer Review
I think this is just a formatting issue, but I believe the lead section should go above the contents table. Also, I think when the article is published it will automatically put "Henry Godinez" at the top so you don't need to put that as a paragraph heading, but instead just start right into the lead section. This is a tiny thing, but I might think about changing the heading "Honors" to "Awards" because they are all awards. Maybe you could add something about his family background, including his wife and daughters (if that isn't weird). I think you could put a bit more in the lead section as well, maybe mentioning his awards and some of the productions he has worked on/theaters he has worked with. Other than that, the article is formatted really nicely and is easy to follow.Farrahsklar (talk) 18:39, 17 May 2018 (UTC)