User talk:Felixdevries717

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Hello, Felixdevries717, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Draft Review
Hi Felixdevries717,

Your rough draft is coming along nicely! It is very interesting and full of information that I previously knew nothing about. You do a great job of formatting and organizing your article sections that make it easy to navigate. I could not find any grammatical errors (which is really impressive, especially with a scientific article), so that's also something you did really well. Overall, I was intrigued by the Death's head hawkmoth, and think it is a good article choice. Good work!

Critiques
My only critiques to give you would be in the "Behavior" section of the article, and maybe a slight variation in word choice. If possible, I would recommend expanding on the "Behavior" section. Right now it appears a little bare, but I'm sure you already know that. "Citations" or "References" aren't listed, although you do provide links within your draft. I know wiki automatically creates its own set of citations at the bottom, so you'll definitely want to separate those from the "Behavior" part of the article, in order to not confuse people. You have very descriptive word choices and I personally understand what you're saying, but others who aren't as familiar with certain anatomical terms might have trouble. This is something that you certainly don't have to change about the article (because the article itself is written very well), but if you want to have a broader audience, this could be something to consider.

--Lilybean896 (talk) 21:35, 26 October 2018 (UTC)