User talk:Felixfurness

September 2020
Hello, I'm WikiMacaroons. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —specifically this edit to Erik the Viking—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks.  Wiki Macaroons Cinnamon? 18:32, 7 September 2020 (UTC)

On the source page, the quote quoted is displayed as below, with 2 line breaks at "must" and "most".

The idea of telling the story of a Viking warrior who thought there must

be more to life than rope and pillage is an amusing one, and for the most

part Erik the Viking is an enjoyable film.

When this quote was copied it seems likely that the last line was missed because without it the quote doesn't make grammatical sense - just ending with ", and for the most". The quote could be ended at "amusing one", or at the end where it says "an enjoyable film", but the current post-reversion state is not a logical sentence. Felixfurness (talk) 16:16, 8 September 2020 (UTC)

Note that the word 'rope' differs from the word in the original quote, but for understandable reasons it triggered the 'unconstructive' filter so for the purposes of explaining I replaced the original 'a' with an 'o'. Felixfurness (talk) 16:18, 8 September 2020 (UTC)