User talk:Femillee/sandbox

Hi there! I took a look at the original article and then checked out the talk section of the article. I reviewed what you wrote in the talk section of the original article and I agree with what you said. There definitely could be more information and details added to this article that would make it much stronger. Your planned contributions to the article are going to be a great addition. I'm interested to see what other religions perspectives are of the apocalypse. I then went to your sandbox and took a look at what you're currently working on. I felt like starting with "End Of the Age" section is a great place to start. That is the section with the least amount of content and needs some developing. I think it would also serve the article well to also add a modern day perspective of the apocalypse. Perhaps how the perspective of the apocalypse has developed over time? Maybe find some modern day examples of how the apocalypse if referenced. Looking forward to reading your contributions! Kaymarie (talk) 04:28, 19 March 2018 (UTC)kaymarie