User talk:Ferinczl/sandbox

Luca's Peer Review
Fifhauseal (talk) 17:44, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
 * In general, citations seem a little sparse. Would recommend building those up before adding text to live article to prevent any removal due to lack of citation
 * Good proportional balance between length of Early Life section and Husband's Death section. Last two sections could use more building up.
 * Nicely detailed factual information, very straightforward and informative
 * If possible to find non-copyright violating images, it would be nice to include some pictures, but most artwork pictures violate Wikipedia copyright so may not be possible
 * When replacing old article text pay attention to how everything fits together