User talk:Ferrer.p/sandbox

1. What does the article (or section) do well?

I really enjoyed how the article was organized. It was clear what the company was before more details on it were mentioned. I also enjoyed the end parts where you went into the my plate movement as well as the Goya Gives section. It definitely added flavor to the entire wiki page.

2. What changes would you suggest overall? In terms of changes, I would maybe include a section on where you can find these Goya foods (ie: specific supermarkets) to let the readers (consumers) know where they can go buy a Goya product. Also in the "History" section, I think you should change "demands" to "demanded" as the rest of the sentence is in the past tense.

3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? There is a lot of things that are great with the piece, I would focus on getting a section related to the consumer buying process of a Goya Product. And what I mean by that is just a section that lets the reader know where in the US they could actually go and buy one of these food products. It may be super obvious to some people inherently but for others that may be a useful section to add in.

4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!

Our two topics are extremely different in nature but just the overall organizational structure and tone used in this article could definitely be translated over to my work.

I hope this was helpful - Andrew R :)