User talk:Fescandon/sandbox

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Reading through this section was really interesting and enjoyable. I had a good time choosing which project under Wiki's "Sexuality Portal" to review, eventually settling on this one.

1. Strengths: the lead section is a good summary, the article is fairly neutral, there are twenty references for a relatively short piece, and there is no warning banner.

2. Weaknesses: the structure only has one large section and it often uses "some" or "many" when quantifying.

3. Other: what I do not know is what could be missing, considering I do not know about this section as well as others in the portal.

June 16th, 2003, is when this page was started with a one-line definition. Material was added starting steadily in 2006 all the way until 2016, with no edits in 2017 yet. When someone edits, it is a rather large quality of changes rather than a couple here and there. Around 50 different people have edited this page over ten years. This is not too active compared to other pages in the portal, yet it is a part of Wiki's Sexuality Project, so it has a higher importance than other articles.

Talk is used once a year, usually to critique and edit current material or criticize the topic subtly. The tone is scholarly and knowledgeable, however, it made me slightly uncomfortable reading it and viewing it as a really uplifting topic and seeing hostile, negatively critical remarks. The same users who edited usually were active on the Talk page.

I edited the page slightly by adding articles (a/the) in addition to changing some spelling errors. I am weary to change the style and format of the page.

Fescandon (talk) 01:37, 31 March 2017 (UTC)