User talk:Fethya

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Hello, Fethya, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi Fethya. Sorry about the delay getting back to you.

I'm assuming that your combined article is at User:Lklarnet/sandbox. I think it looks pretty good, but you should start with the summary (which in a Wikipedia article is called the lead section. What you want is an explanation that tells the reader "what is nanomanufacturing" (or whatever the precise topic of your article is). Begin with "[Topic] is [whatever]" and then go on to summarize the main points in a paragraph or two. Most people looking at a Wikipedia article don't want to know all the details, they just want a quick rundown of what the topic is. What comes after the lead is for the more dedicated readers, the people who want to know more. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:38, 19 February 2016 (UTC)