User talk:Fighting12

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laya Abbasmirzaei (May 24)
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 Velella  Velella Talk 22:10, 24 May 2018 (UTC)

Question
Excuse me ! Imdb and camerimage aren’t independent and reliable sources provided!!! Both of them are existing in my essy ! Why you didn’t see them!!!! Fighting12 (talk) 22:31, 24 May 2018 (UTC)

Fighting12, none of the sources you provided are independent or reliable. Please provide sources per WP:RS. Your article cannot be accepted until it is properly sourced. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 04:23, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laya Abbasmirzaei (May 25)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nthep was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Nthep (talk) 21:17, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Learn to edit before trying to write new stuff
Hi Fighting12. It is very unusual for a new person at Wikipedia to be able to write a new article on something that no one has ever before thought to write about. The easy stuff has already been written, and there are trick and traps for the hard stuff.

You are much better advised to learn some scholarly writing skills by improving existing content. You appear interested in Laya Abbasmirzaei. Great. Find things associated with her, and improve them. Doing this, you'll get to know others with similar interests. --SmokeyJoe (talk) 08:11, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laya Abbasmirzaei (June 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:

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Brad v  03:47, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question
Hello, Fighting12! I'm CASSIOPEIA. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk.  CASSIOPEIA(talk) 07:43, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laya Abbasmirzaei (June 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Shadowowl was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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&raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  13:37, 24 June 2018 (UTC)