User talk:Filll/Exploreevolution

looks good so far but...
I'm not sure about the phrase: "Perhaps coincidentally or perhaps not," I think you might need to simply state the facts, and let the reader draw what conclusion they may. ornis ( t ) 22:44, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I fixed it. --Filll 23:20, 19 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Looks good, I think you could probably move it into article space. ornis ( t ) 23:34, 19 August 2007 (UTC)


 * This seems distracting ""butterfly man"" &#0149;Jim 62 sch&#0149;  10:34, 22 August 2007 (UTC)