User talk:FimusTauri/Abraham

What strikes me as the most obvious issue with the current version is the sheer number of sub-headings. Many of these sub-sections can easily be merged together, as I have done.

It appears that the current version is an attempt to maintain a "chronological order" (or at least, to follow the Biblical order of events). Whilst I agree that this is good general approach, I do not believe that rigid adherence makes a good article. Some events that are seperated in time can readily be dealt with together.

I am removing the many references to specific chapters. The introduction shows where the text can be found. If anyone wishes to insert specific references for specific events, that's fine, but I think they should be as inline cites.

The version presented obviously will need some tweaks, but I feel it is a vast improvement over the current article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by FimusTauri (talk • contribs) 16:43, 23 March 2009 (UTC)