User talk:Fiondion/Park Rehyun/Sb871423 Peer Review

Peer Review Finished
I apologize that my response isn't more detailed but in comparison to the other article I read yours felt very clear and finished. All I would recommend is the minor structural suggestions I left and to add in any other information you find about her in the following month. Sb871423 (talk) 17:06, 10 April 2023 (UTC)