User talk:Fire and Blood Queen/sandbox

Sandbox
Please edit your Sandbox to indicate which group you're working with, and whose page has the team edits. Thanks! IceAgeDoc (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Responding to Article Evaluation
Really nice work with evaluating your article -- you've highlighted strengths and weaknesses, and identified concrete areas for improvement. I especially appreciated that you critically evaluated the sources.

Also, nice work adding a citation, and you've got the hang of formatting (headers, etc.). Let me know if you have any questions! IceAgeDoc (talk) 00:36, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Article Evaluation
Article under review: Pleistocene megafauna (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pleistocene_megafauna)

- Overall this article present fairly well written information that is neutral and equally represented of the different theories regarding Pleistocene extinction. However, there is a heavy focus on explaining when was the Pleistocene and what was the climate at the time and almost no information on the actual animals. A lot more could be add on the kind of animals that use to live in that area, their diet and migration behavior, their relationship to humans. You could even have a section on 'Ice Age' Megafauna in the midea. On the other hand, most of the 38 citations seemed to be coming from primary literature and have working links. Under the Talk page for this article it seemed like there is some conversation going to adding more sections like 'climate change' and potentially margin it with another page (New World Pleistocene Extinction), however it is not part of any WikiProject. Either way, the focus of this article is very different from topics we discussed in class, as it almost doesn't address at all to the actual animals and their interactions with the climate.

Adding Citation:

I add a citation to the article 'Anisakiasis' (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anisakis#Anisakiasis) - reference #12: an article about the similarities between the Anisakiasis infection and Crohn's disease (Anisakis infestation: a case of acute abdomen mimicking Crohn's disease and eosinophilic gastroenteritis; https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/15702862). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fire and Blood Queen (talk • contribs) 23:33, 23 March 2018 (UTC)