User talk:Fire lily445/Rock-cut tombs in ancient Israel

Hey fire lily, It is your peer-reviewer, Hannah (turtlesaregr8). I forgot to write this last week, having only written a hello. You are doing an excellent job. Even from last week, your thoughts and words have nearly doubled. I am equal parts jealous and impressed. I think adding about the tombs in Beit She’arim (? I think I spelled it right but if I leave to check I’ll delete this post). It is take the article from being a bit knowledgeable to an actual informative article. If anything, I would recommend that you figure out a bit more on the early history. The one sentence just doesn’t cut it, I would like to see a bit more substance. Anyways, that’s the only thing I see to be a bit missing on information, other than that, amazing job. Turtlesaregr8 (talk) 00:23, 26 October 2020 (UTC)