User talk:Fireryorganizer

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Hello, Fireryorganizer, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions, especially what you did for Anti-Rent Movement. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! —Tom Morris (talk) 13:26, 15 October 2012 (UTC)
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Anti-Rent Movement
Hi,

Thanks for expanding Anti-Rent Movement. Don't take it as a personal slight (it isn't meant that way, just constructive criticism), but I've tagged it with the context tag because the first paragraph currently doesn't give a reader unfamiliar with the topic enough of an understanding of the subject. The introduction tells me there's something going on, but doesn't clearly answer all the Five Ws:


 * it doesn't tell me what happened: what did the "fight" consist of? Was it a physical fight? A metaphorical fight? It says later on in the first paragraph that there was a rent strike, but it should probably say that at the beginning.
 * it doesn't tell me where: it does eventually meander around to it, but by that point, I'm pretty disoriented.

I don't really know anything about the subject, so it'd be great if you could improve it.

Thanks for improving Wikipedia. Great effort so far! Thanks again. —Tom Morris (talk) 13:32, 15 October 2012 (UTC)