User talk:Fischwrap

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Fischwrap! Thank you for your contributions. I am Hallows AG and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Hallows Aktiengesellschaft ( talk ) 23:16, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
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Did you see these two: Chimeric antigen receptor, Adoptive cell transfer? I am showing them to you because you did not link to them in your proposal on the course page.  Blue Rasberry   (talk)   20:28, 30 April 2012 (UTC)

This article is super thorough and explains a ton, which is great. It already has extensive links, sections, and pictures, so no suggestions there. The only thing that could be helpful is to add one sentence at the very beginning that gives a very simple lay-person explanation? I imagine people really understanding biology and immunology would want to read the whole thing, but people just looking for a quick answer could appreciate one sentence in plain language just saying what a CAR is and what it is used for. There is a lot of detailed information in this article! Also, the NEJM article linked under the history section would require a password or payment to read. Maybe put a few sentences to summarize that article there? Otherwise, nice work! Let me know if you have any more questions about it -- Alie Alpal2012 (talk) 16:43, 14 May 2012 (UTC)Alpal2012