User talk:Fisher2019/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi Fisher2019!

The ideas you have laid out so far look really good! I think your goals to expand the sections you have highlighted are productive, as these excerpts don't seem to read super smoothly and are slightly choppy and bare. Also, I do think that deleting the hyperlinks that only lead to blank pages would improve the quality of Strain's entry. You might consider looking for other relevant links to replace them. Overall, it's looking great! Hopefully we can keep checking back on each other's pages as the progress continues.

- OpticalWriter (talk) 23:30, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Hanna's Peer Review
Great job!

This is a great start to outlining the information you want to change. When I looked at Strain's page, it felt bare since the majority of the text is her bibliography. I think you've made a lot of headway into crafting a more complete Wiki page for her. It's helpful to see how you are changing the outdated information on her page.

I tried clicking on some of the links listed on her page because you mentioned some were not working. I didn't seem to have any problems except for her official website, which led me to a blank page with the word "Hi" on it. See my inserted photo. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but it is probably worth checking out and correcting the link if necessary.



Overall, I think you're doing a wonderful job expanding this page. I'm looking forward to seeing the final version! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hc-ratljost (talk • contribs) 22:54, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Avery's Peer Review
Good start!

I do agree with the other peer reviews that the hyperlinks may benefit from some looking into, but from the looks of it, you're well on your way to making an amazing article! The citations on Strain's page do look a little bare, but that pretty much comes with having a few key credible sources. Your organization and order of information is fantastic. I hope you continue to add on to the article in a balanced way as your little contributions so far are clearly making big impacts on the page as a whole! Averyyclements (talk) 03:45, 20 November 2018 (UTC)Averyyclements