User talk:Fizzgig777

Olay
I've reverted your changes to this article because your contributions have been written in a style unsuitable for an encyclopedia. Please read the links above this message, especially Wikipedia's Manual of Style for an idea as to what is suitable. --  Netsnipe  (Talk)  19:43, 7 August 2006 (UTC)

Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. As a member of the Wikipedia community, I would like to remind you of Wikipedia's neutral-point-of-view policy for editors, which you appear to have violated at Olay. In the meantime, please be bold and continue contributing to Wikipedia. Thank you!
 * If you need further help understanding why I am reverting your edits, then please leave a message on my talk page and I'll be glad to help you. --  Netsnipe  (Talk)  19:47, 7 August 2006 (UTC)

Please do not add nonsense to Wikipedia. It is considered vandalism. If you would like to experiment, use the sandbox. Thank you. Shadow1 19:58, 7 August 2006 (UTC)

The problem is that what you're trying to add to the article reads like a copy and paste from a promotional press release. It's not written from a neutral point of view and it doesn't cite any third party reliable sources as required by any good encyclopedia. To be honest, we don't even believe you wrote it yourself. It smells like a copy and paste job that someone from the Procter & Gamble PR department wrote. Seriously, when was the last time you ever saw an encyclopedia article start with "Once upon a time...". --  Netsnipe  (Talk)  20:01, 7 August 2006 (UTC)