User talk:Fjolla Efendiu/Economy of Gjakova

Regardless of subject, provide some images. Start with the commons: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Gjakova PRose DC (talk) 21:09, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Statistics
Get more current statistics from the Statistics Agency http://esk.rks-gov.net. You talk about history and potential but hardly about the current situation. --Arianit (talk) 19:27, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Some comments
1. Articles should usually begin by mentioning the title in bold. So instead of
 * Gjakova built an economy based on farming and agriculture

it should be something like:
 * The Economy of Gjakova is based on farming and agriculture

2. There are no links. There are many words that could be linked: manufacturing, World War II, and many others.

3. Most importantly, there are no clear references to sources. It mentions reports and institutions, but these should be formatted according to CITE. The format is quite loose, but there are still some common practices, which you can find in many other articles.

Other than that it's very interesting. --Amir E. Aharoni (talk) 21:30, 27 February 2014 (UTC)

Presentation and content
Have a look at articles under Category:Economies by country and city for example on how others have presented information. There's usually tables of different relevant statistics, images, and sections on the different industries, so sections on metal industry, textile industry, etc. instead of just one sentence. -- KTC (talk) 10:44, 28 February 2014 (UTC)