User talk:FlashGordon232/sandbox

Think about separating out an Introductory sentence. Eswanner (talk) 17:07, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
 * "leads many to believe" is a red flag for me. You need to rely on references. Also, be more specific how it can bioremediate. You don't need to capitalize oxygen, etc. Eswanner (talk) 19:22, 25 September 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review Reply
Thanks for the peer review. I definitely want to broaden my references, though it's tricky with something so unknown with very little reputable information out there about it. I'll also try to cut out any repeat information while still including a preview in my lead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gpommier (talk • contribs) 05:24, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Please make sure to move your work to the mainspace. See https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students/moving-to-mainspace-group/moving-your-work-into-wikipedia-s-mainspace-group slides 2 and 3 for help on how to do this. Eswanner (talk) 18:15, 4 November 2020 (UTC)