User talk:Flat Out/T System Inc.

Thoughts
Switched the template to.

Be careful with the wording, its starting to read like a webpage or brochure so keep it to simple facts that can be supported with a reference. Leave the lead for now, you write that last as a summary of the body of the article and concentrate on an overview of a couple of paragraphs that are well referenced. ''' Flat Out   let's discuss it   22:33, 11 July 2013 (UTC)


 * I have no idea where that is. And thank you for pointing that out. Is there a way you could help me make this sound less like a brochure and more like a Wiki article? Spambot elvis (talk) 12:33, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
 * If you cant find the article, go top left and click "User page" ''' Flat Out   let's discuss it   12:42, 12 July 2013 (UTC)