User talk:Flavinista/AdrianaOcampo

SandBox formed as Part of the Science and Society Wiki Edu Flavinista (talk) 01:42, 29 January 2020 (UTC)

SandBox article sections of Adriana Ocampo has been edited and ready for feedback.

Flavinista (talk) 01:30, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi, I have some comments about the content in your sandbox.


 * Generally I like to see each paragraph and section end with a citation. I noticed that the Early life and education section ends without a citation. It would assist the reader in verifying this content if you included the citation where this information comes from.
 * Per Wikipedia style guidelines, we generally omit the "Dr." title unless it's part of a stage name (i.e. Dr. Dre). For biographies, it is recommended to simply refer to the subject of a biography by their surname, omitting titles. I notice at least one instance where Ocampo is referred to by her given name alone.
 * Section titles are in "Sentence case" not "Title Case". You're a bit inconsistent with this one--"Early life and education" is capitalized correcctly, but "Chicxulub Impact Crater" should be "Chicxulub impact crater", and "Nasa Career" should be "NASA career".
 * Another minor thing from the style guide--instead of saying "1980's" with an apostrophe, it is preferred to omit the apostrophe and say "1980s".
 * This is mostly done correctly, but a few instances of references need to be slightly adjusted. At the end of a sentence, the punctuation should be directly followed by the citation (no spaces). If multiple citations are used, there should not be spaces in between them.


 * Overall this looks really good! Let me know if you have questions about this feedback. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:06, 6 February 2020 (UTC)


 * Thank you, your feedback has been incorporated to the text. Please let me know if there is anything else I should address.Flavinista (talk) 19:21, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
 * I think the last thing left to do is fixing the section titles. Section titles are in "Sentence case" not "Title Case". It should be "Early life and education", not "Early Life and Education"; "Chicxulub Impact Crater" should be "Chicxulub impact crater"; "Nasa Career" should be "NASA career". Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:24, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Oh I got it wrong, I'll fix it now. Thank you!! Flavinista (talk) 21:30, 11 February 2020 (UTC)