User talk:Fleuryj

Peer Review: This article is clear and succinct. Each statement is not yet backed up by a citation, but the nuetral tone relays an encyclopedic style and based on the information in the article it seems like it is all from secondary sources. The structure is good, however the article focuses mostly on William Alexander and the music. Although the music is esentially what the film is about, more specifics about the actual film, such as production details, costs, locations filmed, would be more informative on Jivin' in Be-Bop.