User talk:Flip Deciantis/new sandbox

Maya's Evaluation
You did a great job adding information under the "Genre (or Style)" portion of the page. All of your information is clear and objective. You did a great job paraphrasing the information and adding citations for each point that you made. Your writing style flows very well and sounds very reliable. In addition, I thought that your word choice is very good. The reception section that you have created is well formatted and written. Most of the bullet points include a specific year, however, about two don't and it would be great if you included dates for every bullet point if you could. Overall, great job!

Olivia's Evaluation:
I really like how you did the Genre section, especially since you created it on your own. I think you did a good job including citations at the end of your sentences. I would try to throw in some signal phrases here and there if necessary. Your sentences are concise, but very informative and well written. I also liked how in the reception section you used bullet points. I feel like that makes the section less cluttered, but still providing the information you need. Your citations are on point again in this section (I didn't know it faced so much backlash from other countries so that's really cool). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Obaggott06 (talk • contribs) 04:55, 28 November 2019 (UTC)