User talk:FlowerAgainstAWall

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Hello, FlowerAgainstAWall, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback requested
Hi, FlowerAgainstAWall. Where do you intend your draft content to go when you're finished? Into a new article or an existing one? If the latter, which one? Thanks. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:27, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

I'm planning to add this to the lesbian literature page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lesbian_literature
 * Understood. I think you've got a good start. Two things I could recommend:
 * Cite your sources alongside the claims you make. I've converted two of your references to inline citations and you can use the visual editor to re-use or move those citations as needed.
 * Seek out one or two more sources on the book. The two you have are good, but you'll find that your writing will improve as your try to find multiple sources to cross check information or get a broader sense of the possible claims out there. In this case you may want to ask a librarian for some other good sources, but I know that The Advocate wrote about the book during the 80s while it was being banned from some schools and libraries.
 * I hope this helps. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:12, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

I've taken another look, and I still think you've got some work do to. I converted one of your links to an inline citation. Try to convert one of your own to see how it works. You can't cite articles on Wikipedia by pasting the URL into the article, and the method of citation I showed is used for almost all wikipedia articles.

I also removed some claims cited to poor or unreliable sources. One claim (about a court decision) was sourced to a brief "in this week" section of the advocate. If that's the only source noting that decision then it's possible to include it, but I suspect there are better sources out there. Another claim was cited to TV Tropes--wikipedia can only include material cited to reliable sources and user generated databases like Wikipedia, imDb and TVTropes cannot be used.

I recommend you ask your instructor for feedback on the draft, they may be able to direct better than I can here. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:16, 13 April 2016 (UTC)