User talk:Floydmaniax

The Hissing of Summer Lawns
Hi! What appears to be your edit of the article "The Hissing of Summer Lawns" has confused a few people (well all right me and someone else!). The paragraph that ends "...plus a few occasional." appears to stop in mid flow. Did you intend the word "occasional" to be a kind of note, as I have a vague memory that it means this in some musical contexts? Either way I think you could reword it as too many people will probably react as I did by thinking "occasional what?" I am reluctant to edit here as you are the only one who knows your original intent. Thanks. Britmax 09:23, 13 September 2006 (UTC)