User talk:Fmd1994/sandbox

Very interesting topic to write about! Personally, I knew very little about the subject. Good job comparing what Gordon has to say with the reality that not all farmers are doing it. A good Wikipedia article shows the different sides of an argument without mentioning a personal opinion and this is exactly what you did. If possible, in your intro sentence try to "summarize" what CAP is so that the reader knows what the article is referring to when stating all of the pro and cons arguments. Regarding the sources, I am sure you have all your sources saved just remember to cite them at the end of your article :) Other than that great start! I am sure everyone else will find this article as interesting as I did! Anasofiarod (talk) 23:55, 31 July 2016 (UTC)