User talk:Fmoahmed/sandbox

Waleeda2018 (talk) 15:35, 28 November 2018 (UTC)The part added to the introduction seems a little bias. If you are going to talk about benefits of having good terms between two empires, the benefits should be mentioned so that the information does not seem so subjective. The same applies to labeling something as important, it would be beneficial to add some evidence to support this. The following: Oman TV General, Oman TV Sport, Oman TV Live, and Oman TV Cultural,Majan TV,Oman Radio, and many more could potentially be linked. "It began broadcasting for the first time on January, 2009", this sentence should be reworded to either it began broadcasting on..., or It broadcast for the first time on... I don't understand why some words are in bold it may not be necessary. An image may be helpful in the media section.

In the introduction to the media section, the word choice "always" comes off to the reader as biased and subjective in the sentence "The government has always held a monopoly on television in Oman." The claim would also require a citation. Abdulazizalf (talk) 15:55, 28 November 2018 (UTC)