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Recent edit to Fiber to the premises by country
That page is completely out of date and information. I would like to update that section and refer to that postal lookup and information. Is that allowed?

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 * Your edit was promotional and did not seem relevant in a ny way to the article. External links are usually not to be placed in-line. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  12:50, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Recent edit on karan kundra
Actually, I didn't know about it....There were many media reports a publishing about that news so I thought of including that in his biography..... So, I am extremely sorry about that... And I am new as editor to wikipedia though I follow since a years ago....Thank you!!!! Barsha Poudel (talk) 07:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)
 * When adding information to a living person's biography, you need to assess whether the information is encyclopaedic, and whether you have appropriate reliable sources to back it up. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  12:51, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

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adding information about besa mafia article
Hello, How do I send you messages on wikipedia? I am new here and don't know much about it. I wanted to add some information about a dark net site with active hitmen for hire, owned by Besa Mafia with the purpose to have them exposded to light maybe police will close their site down as they did with silk road

But you reverted thechange. What you mean by reliable source? You can check out their site and you will see they claim to have hitmen for hire and to be albanian mafia.. police should close them down but for that, we need include them in sites like wikipedia or news

Please also send me your Bitcoin address, I can donate you an amount for your time teaching me around here — Preceding unsigned comment added by FightingHitmen (talk • contribs) 09:52, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello
hi there,

I am unsure what I have done wrong. I have just had a baby and am using a baby hammock and they are excellent. I want to share my delight and was surprised there is nothing even mentioning the baby hammock one the hammock page. If you feel it is not appropriate then that's fine, I just thought something should be in there.

many thanks,

Robin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Robinseed (talk • contribs) 15:39, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello
Hi, I'm not quite sure what I did wrong. The Sherlock page never mentions how the small amount of episodes (9) can affect its watchers tremendously. Their hearts are practically ripped out and and stuffed in Sherlock's fridge. I just wanted to express the impact it can have on its fans. I hope you understand :) -Sherlock Fanatic — Preceding unsigned comment added by Youraveragetinypotatoes (talk • contribs) 23:49, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

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Edit of Kogan.com page
Hi, You asked why I edited this page saying I didn't explain my edit, but I clearly did. Incidentally are you connected with Kogan.com or Ruslan Kogan as a friend, employee or employee of a company to whom Ruslan Kogan or Kogan.com are a customer? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simgrant (talk • contribs) 02:22, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
 * You've been warned repeatedly, do not blank significant portions of an article without explaining why nor seeking consensus first. If you continue to do so you will be blocked from editing. FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  10:58, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

What did I do wrong?
I saw your comment and I wondered what did I do wrong. SuperPlayz Gaming (talk) 22:34, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
 * You keep removing content without explaining why. That is considered vandalism. Jdcomix (talk) 22:35, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello there, FoCuSandLeArN
My recent contributions were removed from the Avvo.com page's business model section. I will copy and paste my contribution below, for your immediate and ready review. I'd like to know specifically what the reason(s) is/are for removing my contribution to the page. All allegations included in my contribution are not incorrect. It is how the website functions in reality. It may not be what Avvo wants publicly displayed, but it is absolutely how it works. The people need to know. I will take out the satirical opinion that the business model was originally developed by Don Corleone, however, I'd like an explanation as to why else my contribution, in your opinion, does not pass muster. Furthermore, if you could please edit the following so that it does pass muster, and then post it back where it belongs, that would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!! <!-- Avvo’s business model was originally developed by Don Corleone. Here’s how the business model works as applied at its most intimate level: Avvo does not have consent to use the information it misappropriates from other websites to initially create attorney profiles. Instead, it scrapes the Internet for any information it can find on every attorney it can identify, from a reputable source or otherwise, and then it compiles some sort of unilaterally created profile that is supposed to represent the attorney. This representation of the attorney’s skills and expertise in their field is figured into a rating system by way of some “algorithm” which is used to convey to the public the attorney’s professional competence. The term “algorithm” as used by Avvo is meant to elicit feelings of reliability, complexity, and trust without having to explain how its rating system actually works. The algorithm is very scientific and accurate. It is so on point that attorneys can actually leave themselves reviews whereby that attorney’s rating will fluctuate, accordingly. Similarly, any weirdo with an Internet connection can leave a bad review. Both will affect the attorney’s rating. The fact that this is possible, yet Avvo holds out its rating system to be credible, is absurd. Moreover, by simply claiming one’s profile, that attorney’s rating becomes instantly better. In reality, claiming a profile has absolutely nothing to do with any attorney’s skills, ethics, or competence. It follows that Avvo represents to the public that attorneys who choose not to claim a profile versus the ones that do are less competent professionally. The foregoing, taken together as a whole, gleans that Avvo’s rating system is wholly inept, completely arbitrary, and clearly misrepresentative. Again, it’s a very scientific algorithm. Every attorney has worked tirelessly to become a member of their respective bar. Attorneys continue to work tirelessly because the law never sleeps, and all they have is their ethics, knowledge, and reputation. What Avvo does, at its core, is that it takes advantage of this by inaccurately representing to the public what attorneys have worked so hard to achieve. Because they have worked so hard for it, Avvo knows that they will fight dearly to protect it. When an attorney hears that they are being represented to the public with any scintilla of inaccuracy or negativity, the knee jerk response is to remedy, and rightfully so. Avvo utilizes this through a toothless rating system that can only be made better by either participating with the company or by paying it money. Additionally, many, if not all of the websites Avvo scrapes information from, have their own terms and conditions pertaining to the information hosted on their website(s) and the subsequent use thereof. It is highly likely that Avvo violates these terms and conditions when it scrapes this information from the website(s) in order to convert same for its own commercial purposes.

Essentially, Avvo pirates information from different websites in order create profiles. Then, Avvo uses attorney names and likenesses in these profiles so Avvo can attract advertisers for its own commercial gain. Avvo stands to profit from ads that will be placed on attorney’s faces, however the attorney receives no compensation, and there is nothing they can do about it; unless, of course, they pay Avvo $50 per month. What’s more, is that Avvo maximizes their gain by letting direct competitors in the same market place ads on the others’ profile. Thus, if one attorney chooses to submit to Avvo’s extortionistic business practices, then they will have a means to directly affect his or her competitor’s business, and the only way to stop it is to pay Avvo money and participate on their website. Avvo will refuse to delete any attorney profiles in spite of direct and repeated requests to do so. Avvo’s unilateral insistence on its adhesive terms and policies are simply that; a unilateral insistence only applicable to itself, however they act as if they are applicable to people who have never had any contact with the company or otherwise acquiesced to anything having to do with Avvo whatsoever. Avvo is absolutely free to delete any attorney profiles; it just chooses not to in an attempt to effectuate all of the foregoing. Ultimately, Avvo is a glorified Yelp, but with no credibility. It is a creative business model in that it actually does nothing of substance and is unaffected by its morally bankrupt posture, yet still stands to profit. If you are seeking an attorney, you will be wholly misguided by Avvo's "rating" system. If you are an attorney, Avvo will make you an offer you can't refuse.--> — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.89.100.210 (talk) 22:06, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, but this violates several of our most important policies and guidelines. The most evident are sourcing and neutrality. The content is wholly unreferenced and it is severely biased, to the extent it is simply impossible to add any of it to the existing article. If you want to collaborate to build the encyclopaedia, I encourage you to do so, but please familiarise yourself with the way we do things before repeating such edits. I suggest you start with something small, like correcting typos, or adding citations where needed. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  22:42, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

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adding information about besa mafia article
Hello, How do I send you messages on wikipedia? I am new here and don't know much about it. I wanted to add some information about a dark net site with active hitmen for hire, owned by Besa Mafia with the purpose to have them exposded to light maybe police will close their site down as they did with silk road

But you reverted thechange. What you mean by reliable source? You can check out their site and you will see they claim to have hitmen for hire and to be albanian mafia.. police should close them down but for that, we need include them in sites like wikipedia or news

Please also send me your Bitcoin address, I can donate you an amount for your time teaching me around here — Preceding unsigned comment added by FightingHitmen (talk • contribs) 09:52, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, but Wikipedia is not the venue for such things. I suggest you go elsewhere if your objective is to "expose" a website. FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  10:40, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

in regards to Constant_vzw in Constant disambiguation...
Hi!

I was just adding references from 3 different sources as links - please check again in 5 minutes and consider to revert! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zblace (talk • contribs) 18:01, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

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Climate change mitigation, population controls
My comments were declined, but I provided a source. Was it because they were controversial? Brownteller (talk) 13:03, 18 March 2016 (UTC)
 * No you did not, plus it was written in a very biased manner. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  13:07, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Citrix Systems
Hi, FoCuS. I was wondering if you had time to revisit the Recent tagging section on the Citrix Systems talk page. The user who added the tag has never responded, nor have the other editors I pinged. I'd love to help resolve this. Also, I saw your note about Michael Birkin, thanks in advance for looking at my request there. Thanks, 16912 Rhiannon (Talk &middot; COI) 13:57, 18 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Hello, Rhiannon. I've gone through the edit requests just now. I'm aiming to tackle the tagging review over the weekend. Sorry about the delay. Also, would you consider adding an external links section or do you reckon there is nothing relevant that could be added? Cheers, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  14:37, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

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Help with Uproxx?
Hi! I'm a colleague of. She suggested I reach out to you because you often assist with edit requests from the log, and I'm having quite a bit of trouble finding editors to review a draft I proposed back in November for the Uproxx article. If you have time, I'd love your help reviewing what I've put together, or to hear any suggestions you might have for the article. You can view the draft here. As a full disclosure, I have a financial conflict of interest and worked on the draft on behalf of Uproxx. I won't make changes myself and I am very open to feedback! Thanks! Heatherer (talk) 21:24, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
 * hello there! I'd be happy to take a look as soon as I can. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  01:33, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! Let me know if you have any questions or concerns. Heatherer (talk) 01:54, 22 March 2016 (UTC)

Recent Edit to Bella Vista High School
Thanks for inviting me to talk. As a newcomer, I was pleased to see Wikipedia policy to "Be careful not to bite newcomers." (see WP:Bite). I found your comment respectful and encouraging. Yet I must seek your advice.

Thanks again and in advance for your continuing kind courtesy and advice, FoCuSandLeArN. Shinrindera — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shinrindera (talk • contribs) 05:37, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
 * You reintroduced that information after I reverted you, so it was considered vandalism given you did no heed the advice. People without an article are usually not added to lists on Wikipedia, unless there is a strong reason to do so (usually because they're associated with a notable event, for example). And we certainly do not add external links to lists or into articles in-line. Your actions appear to border on advertising, given you pasted a link to the subject's commercial enterprise as well. If you believe the subject passes our general notability guideline or any other topic-specific notability guidelines for that matter, you are free to create such an article, then place the link. As for removing the talk page notice, you can either delete it like with any other page, or archive it. It is your talk page and you can edit it freely. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  13:46, 22 March 2016 (UTC)

Husband
I merely posted that I am her husband, david marcus We have been married four a half years.and that is public knowledge. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.91.119.112 (talk) 14:33, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
 * you need to reference such information, otherwise it'll be deleted. Also, if you are related to the subject, please do not edit the article yourself. FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  14:40, 22 March 2016 (UTC)

kakroli sardara
please dont delete anything. my name is not included. and every thing is true from the reliable sources in the village — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sheoran1993 (talk • contribs) 16:12, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Desist your disruptive editing. You were given reasons as to why your edits were reverted. If you cannot provide adequate sourcing and copy edit the information appropriately for tone and grammar, it will be deleted once again. You will be blocked if you do not desist. Also, please be aware that if you edit from an IP address, such as while advancing your edits from, you could be engaging in sockpuppetry and are prone to be blocked as well. Regards, FoCuS  contribs ;  talk to me!  17:10, 22 March 2016 (UTC)

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WiBrugherio draft revision
Dear Focus, thanks a lot for your assistance in WiBrugherio project. I see that recently you are very busy, and since we are entering the step two of the project, we need to move to mainspace the items translated by. So I was wondering if you can suggest us someone else who can do the revision of our drafts. Here are the items that have to be revised: User:FrOsmetti/sandbox16, User:FrOsmetti/sandbox18, User:FrOsmetti/sandbox19, User:FrOsmetti/sandbox20. Thank you once again! Best --Labaici (talk) 11:18, 22 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm so sorry I haven't been able to get to those sooner! I see you've submitted them to Articles for Creation, which is a good way of getting the ball moving. If you have any issues there let me know and I'll help as best I can. Thank you so much for your contributions and please let me know if there is anything else we can do together in the future. Is the Brugherio GLAM project finalised now? Regards, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  22:55, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Ciao FoCuS, if you have time to review the drafts we will be very grateful. :) Now we are installing tourist signs with QR codes that refer to the Wikipedia pages, so we need the items in English should be completed. We are entering the step two of the project: we are working on Wikivoyage and OpenStreetMap. We would be very happy to work with you again and thank you so much for everything you have done! All the best --Labaici (talk) 08:45, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
 * That sounds great! So when I visit I'll be able to read the articles again! FoCuS  contribs ;  talk to me!  13:45, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

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Spinal Tap edit.
Have added a cite and a name. The cite is the persons own Tumblir where he credits a colleague with the suggestion, is that acceptable? Also since Richard D. Titus has his own page I added a comment on that page. 87.115.94.57 (talk) 18:21, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry but no, Tumblr is not considered a reliable source. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  20:54, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for reaching out
Hi, Yes, I am trying to update the Northwell Health page. I do work here, but there were links to our old website that were Page Not Found. I initially inserted links to our current site, which I now understand wasn't the right thing to do. I didn't touch the copy, so I don't know why the copy isn't OK, all of a sudden. I am adding sources to key facts that weren't previously there.

I guess my question is how do I make this OK? Should I start the page over and submit it for review? Or should I try to clean up the current page with credible sources of information?

FYI, I did create another user account that is not connected to Northwell. Cgasiewski (talk) 13:46, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure what you mean with "I didn't touch the copy"; you've made 15 edits in the last two days. No matter how minor the edits are (which is not your case, by the way), people with a conflict of interest should try not to edit articles themselves, instead requesting edits be performed on the article talk page or on the dedicated venue. Please desist from personally editing the article henceforth. FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  14:13, 30 March 2016 (UTC)

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I regret if I have disrupted something. I was merely trying to correct a misstatement based on my first-hand personal knowledge and my servitude at the school. Felix sr. lived at "Elton" on the Kennett Pike and in Barnstable, MA, not in the environs of Noxentown or Middletown. The main building at St. Andrews was built to suit in the late 1920's; no part of it existed before then, and no part of the building had ever been a personal residence.

I didn't intend to do a test edit; I don't know what a test edit is.

Cheers, James Bullock. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1201SLD (talk • contribs) 04:42, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

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I know Bradley Davies brother is in the Army because i was his next door neighbour for 5 years !!!!! 13:12, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

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Kindly explain how my edits qualify as "vandalism" 2600:1001:B00F:72F:C89C:C1DC:C5E:5509 (talk) 19:14, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Regarding your most recent talk page comment, I suggest you read WP:Civil, and further suggest you not assume What I know and do not know about Wikipedia. You have done NOTHING to justify your accusation, a condescending one word edit summary is not an explanation. You have also displayed An appalling lack of familiarity with both the subject matter and the history of the page in question, upon which you know seem to believe you own. Collaborative editing is something that needs to be practiced, not admonished.
 * you've performed the edit 5 times before, being reversed every single time. This should be enough indication your edit is controversial. Please desist or face a block. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  21:16, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Did you ever think my edit was correct and not the "reversal"? Did you notice my version is both long standing and cited? Did you notice the edits I was reversing came from an open proxy? You like throwing around threats of blocks, maybe you should focus your efforts adressing that violation. Once again, you demonstrate you know little of the subject matter or the history of the page. 10:40, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Close paraphrasing
Close paraphrasing is always a tricky issue. I've asked a question of one of the copyright experts in the English Wikipedia at User talk:Moonriddengirl. I'm quite sure your edits were well meant, and you've created some useful spider articles, but some of the text be too close to the source. However, I'm no expert on copyright! Peter coxhead (talk) 13:06, 9 April 2016 (UTC)

Close paraphrasing
I agree that writing about spiders (and indeed organisms generally) does often require quite close paraphrasing. And it's common in the biological literature – I can easily find examples on my shelves of descriptions copied almost verbatim from one book to another. I'd just like to be clear what the rules here are, since WP:Close paraphrasing, although only an essay, does seem rather negative. has helped me with such issues in the past, so I thought I would ask there. Let's see if we get a reply. Peter coxhead (talk) 09:43, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Sounds great! I look forward to hearing their thoughts. Best, FoCuS contribs ;  talk to me!  15:05, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

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