User talk:Footpathandstile/Farangi-Sazi

The article does a good job at identifying and defining Farangi-Sazi and when it emerged. It broadly covers where these paintings occur and the content they portray. For being a short article, the quality of what is present is tonally neutral and content-wise succinct and effective.

More context surrounding this painting style would be helpful because it would explain why Farang-Sazi paintings were commissioned, who were to view the images, and why certain scenes were depicted. This would be an improvement because it makes the article more specific and clarifies the scope.

The most important thing that can be done with this article I'd say is expansion. I don't know enough about this painting style to pin-point what can be elaborated on, but additions on how the style emerged, why it did, who it was for, and what it meant would enhance the article holistically because it draws connections instead of only identifying.

I don't see much connection between this article and my own, but I would tap into Persian miniatures while reviewing/revising this article!

Also the direction of bibliography looks good and the sources seem credible :)