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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pieter van Os (journalist) (August 24)
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─ The Aafī   (talk)  14:29, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pieter van Os (journalist) (August 25)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mako001 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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Mako001 (C) (T)  🇺🇦 12:24, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

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Mako001 (C) (T)  🇺🇦 13:37, 26 August 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pieter van Os (journalist) has been accepted
 Pieter van Os (journalist), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! Doric Loon (talk) 19:07, 22 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi there. Congratulations on your article. Please note that although I have accepted it, there is still a lot of work to do on it, and it would still be in danger if someone were to propose it for deletion. It would help a lot if you had more citations. Ideal here would be reviews of the books. I would have a footnote beside every entry in the bibliography section, in each case referencing a discussion of the book in some journal. Also, it would be great if you could put the bibliography into the "cite book" format (use the template which you will find in the dropdown menue in the edit box). Doric Loon (talk) 19:28, 22 November 2022 (UTC)