User talk:Forest Trinket/Biting/TNtoMI2023 Peer Review

I am reviewing the work of User Forest Trinket and their article revision on biting! After looking at their revised sections and the original article, I have come up with a couple notes about their work. They did an amazing job! In the lead section, they shortened the explanation of biting compared to the original article. I really like this decision because the original is very wordy and a bit much in my opinion. They kept it very short and sweet, very straight forward, and I think that makes more sense for when it gets googled. I also am not sure if the lead section was shortened all together or just key parts that they revised, but regardless, I enjoyed their contributions! As I was looking at what they revised I realized that they also fixed minor typos like punctuation and capitalization. I believe all added information was relevant and needed, their contributions were very important. The only thing in this revision that I would suggest changing is where the writer added a sentence about humans biting and how those bites can cause infections could be potentially moved to another section besides the lead. I do find it very interesting and a great contribution, just maybe not in the lead. Their citations were also very straight forward, one is a dictionary and the other being a book explaining what diseases can be given when biting human to human. I looked up both citations and though I didn't find the book for free so I couldn't look that far into it, I did find that both sources were published in 2016. I feel like that makes this relatively up to date! I also believe what they did add to the article was previously underrepresented in the article! All information was backed up by secondary sources and they reflect accurately. There weren't any pictures added in the article, but I also don't think that hurt their contribution at all. Over all the tone and balance of this article was kept neutral with no bias! They were very fact based and straight forward as a wiki article should be. I feel like they did a great job!