User talk:Forsmanp

MCVTS athletic details
The material you reinserted into the article for Middlesex County Vocational and Technical Schools does not meet the Wikipedia standard for encyclopedic content. In general, sports accomplishments need to be sufficiently significant, such as winning a sectional, state or national title. Individual accomplishments are rarely notable. The accomplishments added here for individuals making an all-conference team or being nominated for coach of the year don't meet that standard, and the wording describing this as "an incredible accomplishment" and that these individuals "have proven to be role models on the team building each and every player" or that an athlete "has worked extremely hard to get where he is today" or is "proving to be a valuable asset on the team" are examples of the kind of puffery that does not belong in Wikipedia. The absence of sources only aggravates the problem, but even with references the material is simply unencyclopedic and has been removed. As there my well be a connection to the school, you should also review Wikipedia policy on conflicts of interest to ensure that you are editing this article appropriately. Alansohn (talk) 16:43, 12 January 2015 (UTC)

Perth Amboy Vo-Tech
Once again I have reverted your additions to this article. The article does not need full descriptions of the various shop classes offered: these are self-explanatory, or, if not, can be expanded by providing a WikiLink to the page about such courses. The article also does not need a redundant history section: there is already a history section that describes the 1915 opening and the 2004 move. Finally, there is no point in including shop courses that used to be taught in the "OLD SHOPS"; if they are not taught now, and have not been taught in over 10 years, there is no point in keeping them, unless they were demonstrably unique to that school (demonstrably by citation to reliable sources indicating they were unique). WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 15:46, 28 January 2015 (UTC)