User talk:Fortescue.g

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Jae-hwan (singer) (July 28)
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The editor  whose username is Z0 18:27, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Fortescue.g (talk) 04:09, 31 July 2018 (UTC) Hi Zo! Thank you for your review on my draft. And I'm sorry for this late reply.

After waiting for a long time, sure I'm disappointed by your review and comparing this person to Camilla Cabello and Zayn Malik is a little bit too far. Here are my reasons why I insist on my draft to be published:

1. How could you explain these 2 members which belong to the same band as him?

While Kang Daniel already had awards and nominations, Park Ji-hoon only have TV and theatre appearances (which we believe it can't be considered as awards/nominations). And if you can compare the articles between Park Ji-hoon and Kim Jae-hwan (draft), we can say that Kim Jae-hwan has more content than him. But, strangely, Park Ji-hoon article passed the Wikipedia criteria.

One thing to be noted: Kang Daniel, Park Ji-hoon, and Kim Jae-hwan, all these 3 artists have the same career duration.

2. This person also has Wikipedia articles in another language/country.

Indonesia Korea

3. You can also check this band article in Korean Wikipedia Every single member has their own article in Wikipedia. You can check one by one.

I believe id.wikipedia.org and ko.wikipedia.org have the "same root", so the criteria must be the same. The only difference is the language provided.

I'm sure that both of us will have difficulty to check every single person in the world. I hope you can dig more information about this person. And lastly, I also hope this message can reach you well as this is the first time I'm communicating through Wikipedia. I'm waiting to hear from you soon.

Cheers,

Fortescue.g (talk) 04:09, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

Talkback
The editor  whose username is Z0 06:55, 3 August 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Jae-hwan (singer) (October 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Legacypac was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kim Jae-hwan (singer) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Legacypac (talk) 07:04, 26 October 2018 (UTC)