User talk:FoscaF

AfC notification: Draft:Teisseire has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Teisseire. Thanks! /wia  /tlk  17:08, 25 November 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Teisseire (November 25)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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SwisterTwister  talk  22:44, 25 November 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Teisseire (January 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Teisseire and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Teisseire Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:RadioFan&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Teisseire reviewer's talk page].
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RadioFan (talk) 18:02, 1 January 2016 (UTC)

Teisseire (company)
Hello FoscaF. As you can see, I have moved your draft into article space after considerable copyediting and the addition of multiple references per the discussion at the Tea House. I have disambiguated the title to Teisseire (company) to distinguish it from the cyclist Lucien Teisseire and an eventual article on Camille Teisseire. Since you have declared that you are a paid editor on behalf of this company/brand, I strongly suggest that you refrain from directly editing the article further. Instead, suggest any additions or corrections at Talk:Teisseire (company). I have the page on my watchlist. Best, wishes, Voceditenore (talk) 13:52, 12 January 2016 (UTC)