User talk:Fountainbook/sandbox

Overall, the article is neutral and relevant, and it does not contain any biased opinion. There are no over-representation or under-representation. But in the bibliography section, i think i would be nice to describe why "His art is described as contemporary Symbolist." It indeed is an opinion, and can be seen as a frame, and i think this needs to be described why.

Citations work well and footnotes are nicely done.

There is one section in the Artwork section, which says "Drawing and Driving is a performance, drawing, and film piece. Yazzie built a wooden cart that had a way to attach an easel so he could create while on the cart." It is a bit confusing to understand what exactly Drawing and Driving is referring to. Is it a type of art that can be performance, drawing, and film? or is it a title of a work-a wooden cart- Yazzie built. Hshin025 (talk) 04:54, 25 February 2020 (UTC)