User talk:FourthcapeMA

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Offshore Academy (December 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Offshore Academy and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:The_Offshore_Academy Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Theroadislong&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:The_Offshore_Academy reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Theroadislong (talk) 12:47, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Help me!
Can I get help with a page I am working on - I have added all of the information and would like some support with it.

Thanks

FourthcapeMA (talk) 13:35, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
 * The draft at The Offshore Academy was declined by as advertising, and I agree with that: it does sound like something very similar to an About page. It does not make things better that a line or two was lifted more or less directly off http://www.telegraph.co.uk/sport/othersports/sailing/7854330/British-soloists-given-Artemis-Academy-boost.html (see this report), and I should warn you that copyright violations are taken very serious here, and may lead to deletion of the draft entirely. Please read Writing better articles and see if that helps. WikiProject Companies/Guidelines may be helpful as well. If you have further questions, the AFC Help Desk is a good place to ask. Sam Sailor 14:08, 11 December 2017 (UTC)

Conflict of interest?
Hello, FourthcapeMA. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about in the article Draft:The Offshore Academy, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. Editing for the purpose of advertising or promotion is not permitted. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, company, organization or competitors;
 * propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (see the request edit template);
 * disclose your COI when discussing affected articles (see WP:DISCLOSE);
 * avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
 * do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Sam Sailor 14:10, 11 December 2017 (UTC)