User talk:Foxypolymath/sandbox

I had a very fun time reviewing this article. It is a fun topic to discuss and not many people critically think about gender when it comes to horror films. Though you draft is not very dense it is developing well. The lead of the article is very concise and gives a good explanation of what the rest of the article will talk about. I would suggest on creating a subsection where you can explain a brief history on horror films to remind the reader before further investigating the different types of films you are focusing on. For the existing films you are focusing on are at a good start. Your writing is very easy to read and the tone is set well. I think you are very good at being neutral when it comes to writing on Wiki. You do need more sources, but as you create your article further I'm sure you will add as needed. Good luck!

SarahDorvil84 (talk) 15:42, 18 October 2019 (UTC)