User talk:Frances Mamman/Late Pleistocene/Emma.Keary Peer Review

There are multiple areas that could use citations: example: "In North America, about 70% of mammals weighing about 44kg went extinct during the time period of 13 -12 k cal BP. "

when adding citiations and others, make sure it connects back to the oringal peice.

you mentioned the clovis culture, I Would consider hyperlinking this to its wikipedia page when you first mention it, as I first had to question, and I think it could be beneficial, for when you mention it again later.

make sure to check grammer, there are several sentences starting lowercase.

Even though the article was well written going back and re-reading it, and adding something that correlates to your contributions in some fashion could allow it to flow chronically.