User talk:Frank101555/Deaf theatre

Some of the changes that are needed for the article
I already did. a edit on the intro and end but it still needs some work. here are my original notes

The Article is to personable, its written like a argumentative essay rather then a objective look at the subject.

The introduction is to week and non-informal, needs more clarification and to be objective.

The Conclusion is to personal. It speaks as a ending of a essay.

Some of the wording in the article needs to be re written and clarified. Frank101555 (talk) 22:14, 17 November 2023 (UTC)