User talk:FrankDonkor21/sandbox

Hello FrankDonkor21,

Overall, great work on talking about Snapback Hats. It is very interesting that you go very into detail about the subject but it also seems like you know your stuff without the research. Here are some link that you can use to demonstrate the range of hats out there in today Society. 1-http://www.lids.ca/ 2-http://www.zhats.com/ 3-http://shop.nordstrom.com/c/snapbacks

--AndreaHenderson02 (talk) 16:52, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Very interesting article, I was unaware that you could write so much on Snapbacks! Here are some more articles to help: http://rap.genius.com/Finesse-stylin-lyrics#note-1670598 http://www.tillys.com/tillys/browse/Category-Men-Accessories-Hats-Beanies-Snapbacks --Fatemah.hira (talk) 17:02, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, I enjoyed reading your article on Snapback Hats. Personally, I wear them often myself in the summer so I was intrigued to what you have to say and it was well done. Here are a few links you might consider about the history of snapback hats. http://ibroughtsnapbacksback.wordpress.com/history-of-the-hat/ http://blog.mrstitches.com/a-brief-history-of-baseball-caps-snapbacks/ --VMalcolm24 (talk) 17:03, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

I wear a hat normally everywhere I go I found your work very detailed and well written. I thought you could add some of the biggest brands in Snapback Hats. http://www.hatclub.com/hat-brands.html. Also to show how big the MLB endorses the Snapback. http://www.lids.ca/mlb/hats/department_snapback --Ridgebacks19 (talk) 00:32, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

I don't know how but you managed to write a very detailed article about hats. You can also expand your article to include strapbacks which are also very popular right now https://www.culturekings.com.au/headwear/strapbacks.html. You can also talk about New Era snapbacks which is probably one of the most popular hat companies at this point in time http://shop.neweracap.com/new-era-9fifty/gender_mens. --Nehalchauhan96 (talk) 22:38, 19 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, I never knew that these hats exist, now that I know from your detailed article I will purchase a couple. for the future I would suggest getting into more detail about brand name snap backs. here are some links to aid readers on where to get the top designer snap backs. http://www.mitchellandness.com/headwear?SID=vjjrl5da5kogfogq3fl0bmivo4, http://shop.neweracap.com/new-era-9fifty/gender_mens, http://shoptisa.bigcartel.com/--Waymondt (talk) 17:11, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Nice article on snapbacks! I enjoy wearing them myself. Here are a couple more articles about snapbacks: http://ibroughtsnapbacksback.wordpress.com/history-of-the-hat/ http://blog.mrstitches.com/a-brief-history-of-baseball-caps-snapbacks/--Jaytos (talk) 17:41, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

I particularly liked your article although i found a lot of overlap and repetition of certain information. An example of this is when you discuss the price and how they are a fun and popular item. I also feel that if you combined some of your paragraphs you could eliminate having controversially the same heading. This can be noted in your Hats, Head-wear and base-ball caps they are all essentially the same thing and could be combined to eliminate confusion as well as content overlap. I also disagree with some of the information you provided especially regarding the cost of certain hats. If you look on this cite http://www.lids.ca/?mkwid=sbDwAXStW&pcrid=30474386467&pmt=e&pkw=lids&cpid=gcanada&gclid=CLiKuMj25MECFQQHaQodI0AALw you can find a store that sells only head wear. This cite would also be beneficial for your topic because you can discuss how certain companies arose due to the hat trade and what type of markets that company supplies to. Another valuable book that would help improve this page would be "The Anthology of Rap". This book is significant because it discuss the significance of apparel in the rap industry. One of the major articles being a hat or a "snapback". This book could add another heading to your article such as "The significance of the hat" or "Hat Culture. Other then those few mistakes, I feel you executed a very informative article. --DonkoC88 (talk) 17:54, 11 November 2014 (UTC)