User talk:Frank Watson

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! &mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 21:30, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Helen Bayes, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! j⚛e deckertalk 00:01, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
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 * Hi Frank, I wanted to drop by and let you know that I'd taken some larger-than-usual editing measures to get your article past the creation process, a fair bit of rewriting and such, and I thought you deserved an explanation, you've clearly put a good deal of work into the article, and Hayes sounds like a wonderful biographical subject for our encyclopedia.  While I've reduced the material in the current draft substantially, you should be able to find old text and references in the article history.  The main things to do if you consider expanding the article are to find secondary sources where possible, independent from Hayes, for substantial additions of material, to write those additions as prose, and to cite them with in-line references the way I've described.  A lot of the other editing I've done is just conformance with our Manual of style.
 * Anyway, I hope you'll take this as appreciation for the work you've put into the article. Have a great week, --j⚛e deckertalk 00:09, 7 May 2013 (UTC)