User talk:Franz710/Crucifixion in the Philippines

Lead section
If you haven't noticed, every article on Wikipedia has an introduction that appears before the table of contents. This is known as the lead section. It provides a brief summary of the subject of the article. In the case of this draft, I changed the first section to the lead because it serves well as an introduction. --User:Anon126 (talk - contribs) 22:46, 21 January 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you User:Anon126 (talk - contribs) for the recent change, I really appreciate it, Any more suggestions are very much welcome.I am excited to collaborate for this article  Kixzer   Franz710   ( talk ) 23:09, 21 January 2014 (UTC)

Citation templates
I noticed you used what are known as "bare urls" for your citations, which are URLs put within tags. This is a good first step, but they are not ideal. If the website changes, the URL may "rot" (no longer work), and it will be difficult to find the source again. I have changed the first few to citation templates, which are an easy way to provide information about the source. --User:Anon126 (talk - contribs) 23:14, 21 January 2014 (UTC)


 * Wow oh boy I have too much to learn, let my try that on the other links. Kixzer  Franz710   ( talk ) 23:24, 21 January 2014 (UTC)