User talk:Fraredemptor

Your submission at Articles for creation: Indoor Advertising (April 11)
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Hoary (talk) 01:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Indoor Advertising (April 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Greenman were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Greenman (talk) 21:18, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Indoor Advertising (April 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 09:39, 22 April 2023 (UTC)

Feedback about Draft:Indoor Advertising
Hi Fraredemptor,

I did glance at your draft and comment on it, but I didn't look at it thoroughly - it is still in the queue for someone else to give it a full review. That said, it looks like reviewers (and other people looking at the draft) have three main concerns:


 * 1) The tone of this draft reads more like a marketing company trying to promote indoor advertising than a formal encyclopedia article explaining what indoor advertising is.
 * 2) Why does this topic deserve its own article, rather than just being a section in the article advertising?
 * 3) The best sources for an article are usually the ones that aren't written by people closely connected to the topic - in this case, the best sources would be ones not written by advertising companies.  (As a side note, I don't know quite what you mean by "I didn't add new sources because there aren't any.")

One last question: did you write all of the text and take all of the pictures in this draft, or are any of them copied from somewhere else?

I hope this is of some help. LittlePuppers (talk) 04:59, 6 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi, thank you for your reply. I was thinking of creating this Indoor advertising page for non-commercial purposes, as I am not in any way involved in marketing business. Why I do believe it deserves a Wikipedia page of its own is that indoor advertising - even is included under the big advertising umbrella - is specialized in advertising exclusively in closed spaces. Do you think that I should rather write it as a section of Advertising page? And yes, I wrote the whole text and took all the pictures by myself (from malls and other commercial public spaces). None are not copied from anywhere. Thx. Fraredemptor (talk) 10:12, 7 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: All for ads (November 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 12:59, 8 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi. I noticed that you dismissed my draft article a few seconds after I posted it. Did you had time to read it at least? Tell me please, what is missing? I have in my article independent sources and official sources. Also, and this is very important, it is an article about a company. It may not be Coca Cola or Siemens, but it is a company. So, what is the problem with my article? Thank you. Fraredemptor (talk) 13:07, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Look, here is the Wikipedia page of a newspaper, ZF.ro https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ziarul_Financiar. Is this an indepth stuff? Why this page is already approved but mine is not? Thank you. Fraredemptor (talk) 13:15, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:All for ads has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:All for ads. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 13:15, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Indoor Advertising


Hello, Fraredemptor. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Indoor Advertising".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗ plicit  00:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC)