User talk:FreakyGrrl

Re: Shy Love
Re your message: I think your draft is headed in the right direction. Your addition of a Adult Film Career section and rearrangement of the Personal Life section is an improvement to the article. The request for citation was likely added because the editor felt that the statement was made in good faith and sounded reasonable, but just needed a source. I agree that the statement can be deleted along with the entire second paragraph in the Adult Film Career in your draft. One other thing is that you should also probably delete the sentence about her overbite since it doesn't add much to the article and the reference is a review that doesn't actually state it affects her speech. You might want to work on the External Links section and integrate some of the information from the interviews into the article instead of just linking to it. -- Gogo Dodo (talk) 21:21, 24 June 2008 (UTC)