User talk:Freddylazaro/sandbox

There are several of studies that demonstrate the relationship between childhood obesity and dietary consumption. The writer of this Wikipedia article indicates that childhood obesity is a result of high-sugared flavored drink and high-calorie fast food restaurant meals. In addition, the author makes significant facts suggesting why children become overweight by providing reliable journal citations (at least three) in each paragraph. One aspect of the article that distracted me the most was that, the writer suggested (at first) that food intake was not a significant factor to childhood obesity. Meaning that if a child ate more a less (based on a study), the individual would remain the same or gain weight. Towards the end of the writers paragraph, he/she suggested that the intake of fast food would increase a child’s weight, therefore making the authors argument weak. I believe the author is trying to sound neutral as possible, but with the given information he/she has, the authors point of view leads them to indicate that childhood obesity is a result of a high intake of sugared drinks and unhealthy meals. Although the writer did input citations on his/her article, one of the links does not work such as link number 40. The author provides good information that is up to date, although he/she should probably fix citation number 40, so their article could look solid. (Freddylazaro (talk) 17:00, 16 November 2015 (UTC))