User talk:Freefromfear1234

Domestic violence
Hello,

Thanks for your additions to the Domestic violence article. Its great to have your input!

I reverted the additions, though, for a couple of reasons:
 * 1) There is no need to restate the info that is in the body of the article - the intro is already a bit long
 * 2) Citations are not needed in the intro for info covered in the body of the article
 * 3) There were some wording/grammar issues

Since you're interested in the topic of types of Intimate partner violence, if you'd like to expand that article, that would be great! Other options are Cycle of abuse, Cycle of violence, or Power and control in abusive relationships, or Management of domestic violence (this one especially needs more info / up to date info}... to name a few.

Also, there's a cool tool to format the bare google books urls into a citation using http://reftag.appspot.com/ For instance, your source:
 * http://books.google.com/books?id=eR1YZXJHvdYC&pg=PA41&lpag=PA41&dq=mutually+combative&source=bl&ots=m0CND_Wuep&sig=o3KtKzrqH0JFQwGTqVP9kwjt9VM&hl=en&sa=X&ei=RddbU_CSG87JsQT04ILYDg&ved=0CC4Q6AEwAQ#v=onepage&q=mutually%20combative&f=false
 * is quickly formatted to:
 * Which would appear in the references list as: Dudley D. Cahn. Family Violence: Communication Processes. SUNY Press; 9 January 2008. ISBN 978-0-7914-9383-0. p. 41.

I hope this helps!-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 20:38, 26 April 2014 (UTC)