User talk:Freeman.all/sandbox

Microbiomeman (talk) Evan (Peer Review) —Preceding undated comment added 15:07, 5 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Like the idea of updating this page, definitely needs it!
 * Yeah as we talked about the entire page, needs to be updated to fit the present tense.
 * Potentially change achievement to Significant Findings -- and clean it up a bit -- split into sub categories
 * Potentially add some of the authors who are playing a crucial role in the project
 * Continue the subheading you started.

From: David Allen Peer Review

- likely will need to add a sentence in the beginning of the article briefly explaining that currently there's a new phase. Along those lines the jumps in the intro between present and past tense is confusing, especially if it's still ongoing

- Maybe a sentence or two summarizing the purpose of using all these "omics" technologies. Or just a little more explanation on the methods (but I don't know what should be explained in this article vs. what should be reserved for the more specific articles)

PeachOP (talk) 20:55, 30 March 2018 (UTC)