User talk:Freewoman11

Ways to improve Sophia Amoruso
Hi, I'm Salimfadhley. Freewoman11, thanks for creating Sophia Amoruso!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. The Career section could benefit from some redrafting: An eBay store is not a "where" - a word which is used inappropriately twice in one sentence.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. Salimfadhley (talk) 20:46, 21 December 2013 (UTC)